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Tuesday, May 3, 2011

Haiku

Businnesman passed through to me.
Union workers on the street.
I can't glimpse the windy day.

 From the Starbucks to Tin Drum
I feel I was on a red carpet
I feel very comfortable.

Summer time coming soon.
Be ready to take out the flipflops
Walking through the streets freely.

1 comment:

  1. Dear Ironman, your haiku function almost as a stream of consciousness. Since I saw where you were sitting on Fifth Street across from Tech Square, I know that you couldn't "glimpse the windy day." Great phrase. I am also pulled to the phrase, "I feel I was on a red carpet." It makes me think of the Academy Awards. What a nice feeling to have, especially since it leads you to the thoughts of summer and wearing flipflops.

    Great feel to these poems!

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